Friday, August 11, 2006

Scarred



The quiet autumn evening was broken by the movement of an animal in the woods. Its entry had demystified the sullen mood of the woods. The rider's grunt had raped the serenity of the woods. The horse's hoofs were covered with a mix of blood and mud. The drapes put on the horse to justify the regal position enjoyed by the rider was in tatters. The elegant beast, which had previously left the stable shining in the middle of the day, was left in the woods to recover from the wounds of the ensuing battle. The rider was in no better condition. His armour shattered. His morale battered. The horse had taken the path through the woods to distance itself from the mind-numbing battlecries and merciless killings. The drizzle had made the soil wet and the path ardous for the animal to cross. The rider lay motionless on the horse; trying to recovering from the shock of combat. The images of the sword piercing the metal armour and into the flesh of his troops still lay in his head. The pleas of the soldiers lying on the ground, stained by carnal remains, still rung in his head. Things had gone awry. This was not how the plan was supposed to work. This was not how his King wanted the campaign to move. The weather seemed to change for the better. The rain had receeded and the moonlight showing him the way through an otherwise dense woodland. The sun had set just before the arrow had pierced the rider's right leg. The rider did not seem to mind the pain as he had been through worse. The rider was beset with the implications of the battle on the campaign. The rider knew that the woods would lead him back to the safety of his lands soon.

But there was much left to do. Much left to plan. Much left to achieve. Much left to succeed. Much left to travel.

4 Comments:

At 9:25 PM, August 11, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

orey, its time you put link in orkut...the only thing i dont understand abt the post is the timing, why now??
-Nikhil

 
At 10:36 AM, August 15, 2006, Anonymous sai k said...

interesting... and i think i can guess why now as well... but was it that bad dude? :P

and hey, too optimistic for my taste! shall i continue the story?

"the horse wandered days on end in the woods, trying to seek out a remotely familiar route back. the rider knew the woods could take him back home, but did not know how - he was too weak to steer the horse in any case. life certainly has a way of upsetting the best laid plans of men - this he discovered to his bitter loss in the battlefield some days back. he needed to get back to his king, heal the wounds and get back in action. the campaign needed him.

it was on the fourth day of such wandering that he discovered the gangrene spreading from the arrow wound. by the sixth day, he was delirious. and the seventh day, he was no more."

how's that? :D

 
At 1:24 PM, August 16, 2006, Blogger Rahul Srivatsa said...

@Nikhil
Gen musings of an idle mind :)

@Psycry
You can guess why?? :O

But sli KLPD ending. Typical Karan Johar ending i was thinking of. The rider will go back to his village and will be welcomed by falling leaves (*Background music on). Hot girl walks in slow motion. The rider gets down and falters in his initial steps. The hot girl comes to the aid of her hero, the rider. The hot girl takes care of the rider..for him to recoup his strength. To heal his wounds. Blah Blah Blah (*After a lot of fart) and they live happily ever after.

Tu kya tho bhi maar diya usko?? :D

 
At 9:33 PM, August 16, 2006, Blogger Sai K said...

heheh... well, i guess ppl hv had enuf of karan johar type endings for sometime now! i guess then mine was inspired by omkara! besides, KLPD endings r more enjoyable!

and as for me guessing why, mebbe i thought too much into it... thought u were metaphorizing ur iit life... with the btp being the arrow wound in the end. if so, i think my story bears closer to reality! :P

par mujhe kya pata, i guess i AM thinking too much... put it down to an idler mind than urs! :D

 

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